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Re: Breathing
To be truthful, I had no idea what you were talking about until I read your review. Actually, I would have to agree on what elephantwalrus said. It kind of ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: A Smile, and the World Stops Breathing
Nice! I like the enthusiasm of the end, where it turns out that it was just a boy smiling at you as you passed him in the hallways. It expresses ...
May 30, 2008 -
Re: Kite tails
Wow. Thats all I have to say. Well, almost. This is some pretty deep stuff. it makes a person wonder what it is like for someone like this to live. ...
Apr 15, 2008 -
Re: Secret.
I really liked the fact that you were trying to describe something through many others, it was neat. I would just like to point out though, that you left us ...
Apr 15, 2008 -
Re: Be Free
it was pretty good, but I'm confused. is it the wind, or a guy talking to you? And is it about love and death, or seeing something for the first ...
Apr 15, 2008 -
Re: The Daughter of the Sun and the Son of the Moon
All I can say is...wow. I mean, it was a really good story. You brought a natural event, and made it something extraordinary. It was a fair amount of sadness, ...
Mar 8, 2008
